The rocks are too boxy, and the waters moving like someones jumping in it.
Why is there a skeleton there, I assume he has dropped the tome? The Tome should have some sort of warning or puzzle on, something that makes the player think "hmm why did he die because of this?"
Keep going, but try and lay subtle clues that the player can pickup and build a story on.
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