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[jack hawkins]

Hello guys.

Love the way Master Sword has been growing so much and has become something i never imagined. Im back playing again after a few years serving away in the army, used to be in the clan B.O.U with J.M you might remember me. still making maps? At the moment working with an amature film director and would like to get some honest feedback and I thought this would be a good place, so let me know what you think.

Also my name on MS:C is Jack Hawkins of course so look out for me

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Irh9Ivtu9l0

Cheers

 

[Freerad]

Welcome back!

 

[Jelly]

It's nice. There are only two things I think you could improve upon. The camera work (the shaky bits took away a little of my immersion, I preferred the smooth panning) and the sound effects (I'm mainly thinking the scene where the guy from the house hits that military guy with the back of his rifle (around 8:25), it may sound that way in real-life, I don't know, but I would have liked a more noticeable *thump* or something like that).

Other than that I liked it. Ambient sounds were good, you used your credits rather than just showing them, the acting was good, don't know about the story yet, but I guess I'll just have to find out.

 

[J-M v2.5.5]

Yo weren't you back already for months under the name KingLemo...?
Anyway hi!

 

[jack hawkins]

Hello JM no that was not me, that was one of my mates who was playing on my steam account.

Thanks Jelly for the feedback, the sounds do really need to be imrpoved. The guy is investing in better audio software