The Broken Temple [CONCEPT]

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I was bored a few days ago, so I wrote up the backstory of my final(-ish) map. I am waiting for a few other maps to get finished, first, but here is a little something :p

Ursasti (Yer-us-tea), the head priest of the besieged temple, hid in the corner of his chamber. The ground gave another violent shudder and lay still. Cautiously, he got to his feet and crept towards the door. Outside of his small room was the enlightenment dome. The dome was divided into two halves; one half was light, the other dark. A zig-zag cut divided the two colors, and in turn, the entire room.

Rather, this is how it was supposed to look, but, even before the old priest's eyes, the white side was fiding into a vile shade of black. Somehow, the platform with the Urdualian crest had managed not to fall into the endless abyss after the quake. It stayed suspended, though seemingly fragile.

Urasti gingerly tested the platform to see if it could hold his weight, as it was the only way to cross the room. As soon as his foot touched the stones, he dropped to his kness and clutched his bald, wrinkled head; non-existent voices has begun to rip through his brain.

"One is still alive! Should we kill him?" asked the first.

"No, he may prove useful to us," said the second. "Mortal, what is your name?"

"I.. My name is Urasti. I am the head priest in this Urdualian--"

"Huh.. Urdual," the first started. "We should kill him now for even mentioning that betrayer's name!"

"Calm yourself. I have waited too long for this to have you ruin it all with misplaced aggression. You've already possibly alerted Pathos to our presence with the slaughter. Now, as for this human..."

Urasti lay face down, unconscious. A small amount of blood trickled from his ear down to his open, unmoving eye.


More information about this map is on the Wiki >_>
 

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i was wondering if there was ever going to be a map for that one priests little tale on a "broken temple" lol
 

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Let's hold off adding entries to the wiki until we have an actual map, shall we? ;)
 
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It's in the concept area....
 
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I'm going to go ahead and pass...
 

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Teh said:
You should write sex novels...

That made my day, thank you Teh.
 

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I'm not entirely sure if it's an insult or a compliment :p
 

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At any rate...

It's a good concept...I would totally map it if I could. How're the other maps going?
 

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You'd have to ask Blasto, Squirrel, and Dridje >_> Squirrel was working on the brush sketches for badlands last night (trying to, at least >_>)
 

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I'll give you a hand tomorrow or something..
 

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Very Nice..... just please lower that Bastard creatures damage down..... lol
 

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What bastard creature?
 

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The monstrous tihng in that hall were all the priests are
 

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Oh, you don't fight him ;-)

...Yet
 
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